Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
"Encouraged to have a group of entertainment activities is necessary for
children
in their free time
" some people believe.But some parents
like their children
to spend more time
with their own.In my opinion , giving children
an opportunity to children
for having an independent plan with their piers is more helpful for them in their lives.
On the one hand ,some people tend to create groups for their children
,because of increasing their relationships among their peers. Furthermore
,they will manage it in the best conditions ,Because ,they want to avoid their frustration and isolation in society.If the children
spend more time
with their friends
in their free time
under parental supervision , certainly , they can keep themselves aware of possible risks.I think , training the children
by creating a creative group that is
trustworthy for them would be more helpful .Because they have a better time
with their friends
in their leisure time
,likewise
compared them to have independable personality in their future.
In fact,having the correct children
's relationships is the main worry for their parents
.On the other hand
, the parents
are afraid of their children
's communication ,because of the dangers of new relationships. Besides
,they tend to spend more time
between themselves and their children
in children
's leisure instead
of spending time
with their friends
.For instance
, going to the cinema ,having a picnic near a river or having exercise with their family. From my point of view, this
kind of parents
have compulsory activities for their children
and restrict them to their family. That would be more dangerous for children
in their future lives.It is that they could not have applicable decisions in their chosen suitable friends
for themselves.
In conclusion, parents
can make their children
's personalities through their decisions about giving the opportunity to their children
to choose which plan to have in their free time
,with their friends
or alone or with their family, that is
related to their choices in future.Submitted by Pegahghaderi85 on
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