The bar chart below gives information about the number of students studying Computer Science at a UK university between 2010 and 2012.

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a university in England from 2010 to 2012. As an overview, it can be noticed that

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home students possessed the highest rates in both genders. In regard to males, it can be seen that in 2010 the percentage of UK students was double in comparison to the one of overseas.

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, the figures were similar in 2011, both at almost 25 per cent.

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, a year later, the rates peaked at

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45% for locals and at nearly 40% for

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.

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,

British

folks maintained their majority. In regard to females, it is apparent that

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more

British

women were enrolled in the course, as internationals had minor rates.

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, it can be observed that the numbers of local females

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increased from almost 35% in 2010 to exactly 45% both in 2011 and in 2012.

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but not least, despite the fact that overseas girls showed

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over the year,

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they could not manage to reach the figures of the

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girls.