The diagram below shows how rainwater is collected and converted to drinking water in an Australian town. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the picture below. Write at least 150 words.
The diagram shows the way in which rainwater is gathered and transformed into drinking
water
in an Australian town.
Overall
, the process consists of seven stages, beginning with a collection of water
from all houses and ending up with distributing the purified water
to all the houses in Australian towns.
First of all, the rain which falls on the rooftop is collected by the gutter and then
runs down the pipe at the side of the house into the drain at the bottom. Each house collects rainwater in this
way and after that, the water
is passed through drains to a water
filter, where the water
is first filtered to remove all the impurities. The filtered water
is then
transferred to a huge rectangular shaped storage tank.
In the next stage, the water
from storage is sent by tubes to a water
treatment plant, in which chemicals are added to treat the water
. Subsequently
, with the chemical treatment the water
becomes germ-free. Finally
, the water
is ready for drinking and it is sent to all the houses through pipes.Submitted by sreyakaruturi on
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