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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The diagram illustrates the mean carbon dioxide released per head in 4 different nations from 1967 to 2007.
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, it is immediately apparent that
Sweden
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 and the United
Kingdom
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 saw a decline whilst Italy and Portugal observed a rise.
To begin
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 with, the average amounts of gas emitted in the United
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,
Sweden
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 , Italy and Portugal stood at just about 11, nearly 9, a little over 4 and just over 1 metric
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tonnes
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 respectively in the year 1967. Over the next 10 years, the United
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 observed a steady fall in
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emissions made just above 10 metric
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.
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, the remaining three countries noticed an increase in the released carbon dioxide with
Sweden
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, Italy and Portugal each recording a little over 10, 6 and 2 metric
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 respectively.
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, in the next 30 years, both
Sweden
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 and the United
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 saw a reduction in their emissions reaching nearly 8 and almost 5 metric
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 respectively by the end of the survey. Meanwhile, there was a continuous rise in the release made by each individual in the other 2 countries at just below 8 metric
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 for Italy in 2007. And that of Portugal recording almost 5 times the original figure in 2007.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sweden, kingdom, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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