The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The flow chart above exhibits the procedure for recycling elastic jars.
It is obvious that there are 9 distinct stages in
this
process, from the throwing of plastic vials into recycle bins to the eventual production of usable products.
At the first stage
in the bottle recycling process, elastic glass is thrown into recycling bins by members of the public. Afterwards, the waste is gathered by the garbage collector and delivered to the recycling centre. At the recycling centre, there are some particular employees to sort the jars.
In stage four the sorted jug is compressed by the machine into blocks. Then
, compressed blocks are crushed and washed sequentially. The next stage is about producing, after washing crushed blocks go into a machine that turns them into moulded pellets. Afterwards, the plastic pellets are heated for the purpose of making raw material. Raw materials are used to produce end products, such
as urns, pens, shopping bags etc.Submitted by huseynzadasettar on
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