The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar graph below illustrates 5 different product categories in one country in 2015 and 2016. The table demonstrates the proportion modified in each item of
goods
in 2016 compared with 2015.
It is clear that
petroleum products
and engineered goods
were most popular exported in both two years. Also
, the percentage of exported was accounted for textiles.
In detail, in 2015 the highest income from selling products
was related to petroleum and engineered goods
about 60 and more than 55 billion
dollars
. Also
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,Also
this
values increased significantly in 2016 and values of petroleum Correct determiner usage
these
products
rose by 3 per cent
and engineered goods
increased by 8.5 per cent
. In addition
, government
exported more than 40 Correct article usage
the government
billion
dollars
from germs and jewellery goods
in 2015 which is
decreased by 5.18 per Unnecessary verb
apply
cent
in 2016.
However
, in 2015 governments achieved approximately 30 billion
dollars
by selling agricultural products
. Whereas
, textiles exported to other countries approximately less than 30 billion
dollars
in 201. While in
2016 sales revenue of both two Correct word choice
In
products
increased moderately that
the percentages in values for Correct word choice
apply
this
two Correct determiner usage
these
products
went up roughly 0.81 and 15.24 per cent
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, products, billion, dollars, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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