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the line graph below shoe the resaons why people move from the countryside to the city.

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The line chart illustrates information about the four main
reasons
 why
people
 relocated from rural
area
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areas
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 to the capital
city
 between 2000 and 2015.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 career is by far the most popular
reason
 that
people
 move to the
city
for
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,
while
 adventure is the least throughout the period. In 2000, approximately 60,000
people
shipped
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 to the
city
 from the countryside because of their job,
whereas
 less than half of that figure moved to the urban area
for studying
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.
Although
 fewer
cases
 in 2000,
study
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reason
 was by far the most rising
cases
 which
was
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 triple in the numbers in the next 15 years. employment and study
reasons
 showed
dramatic
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 increase and ended up with almost 90,000
cases
 each in 2015.
For the
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reason
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reasons
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of
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 moving to the capital
city
 from the rural area because family, friends and adventure are the least two and the survey
was
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collected around 10,000
cases
 for both
reasons
 in 2000. Despite starting at about the same number for both
reasons
, family and friends
reason
 gradually rose and plateaued at just below 25,000
people
,
while
 adventure purpose slightly went up to over 15,000
cases
.
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