The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The Museum has

been

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changed a lot from 1998 to 2008, except

the

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for the

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tickets

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ticket

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entrance

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or exit and permanent

exhibition

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rooms. In the middle of

Museum

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the Museum

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, there

were

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was

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a large garden behind the

tickets

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ticket

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entrance

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in 1998

while

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cafe

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a cafe

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sitting area and fountains were added into it at the year of 2008. The

cafe

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was on the back of the garden but WC was moved from the right side to the

cafe

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nearby in 2008. On the left side of the

entrance

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, there

were

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used to be

temporary

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a temporary

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exhibition

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room. But after 10 years there was a shop and a bags and coats site which used to be

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the right side of the

entrance

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. The temporary

exhibition

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room was next to them. At the left corner facing the temporary

exhibition

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room and

cafe

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, a restaurant was standing there.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words entrance, exhibition, cafe with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

139 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rectangular shape
central garden area
symmetrically arranged
expanded galleries
visitor flow management
temporary exhibition space
permanent gallery
visitor facilities
customer service focus
dedicated children's area
expanded restroom facilities
museum gardens
unoccupied outdoor space
shift towards long-term exhibits

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