You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: oapologize for what happened o explain why you missed the deadline o tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to apologise for not hand-in order documents on time and
due to
that, we are
loosing
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vip
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VIP
client
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. The problem that
i
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encountered
this
week. My brother
is pass
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away and
i
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feel so lonely because
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used to talk to him every time,
i
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came back from work. Prior to the deadline. I was in the hospital and
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the
last
day for him.
In addition
to that,
i
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have no family that will take care
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brother. I was the only one who
prepare
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and
provide
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everything before my
brother
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family came to his funeral. For your information,
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will never let you down again and
this
is the first and
last
for the
last
deadline
and
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in the coming future. There
is
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no more excuses and
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mean what
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have said. I
apologies
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again for everything and
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appreciate your time and the phone call we had yesterday. look forward to
see
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you at work.
Yours'
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, Faithfully. Tokateti T
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coherence cohesion
Make sure to structure your letter clearly with proper paragraphs.
coherence cohesion
Use a more formal and appropriate greeting and closing for a professional letter.
task achievement
Address all three points mentioned in the prompt.
lexical resource
Use more appropriate vocabulary and grammar to convey your ideas clearly.
grammatical range and accuracy
Review your grammar and sentence structure to improve accuracy.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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