The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009

The diagram illustrates the recorded home structures that were put up in Derby and Nottingham from 2000 to 2009.

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it is immediately apparent that for most of the years, more buildings were constructed in Derby than Nottingham. With regards to Derby, the number of homes put up in 2000 and 2001

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the same at 40.

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figure increased from 2002

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75 reaching 125 in 2003. Over the next 4 years, the recordings obtained stayed at the same value of 125. In the following year, the buildings constructed shot up to 275, a recorded value of more than double that obtained in the

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rose reaching close to 350 in 2009. Turning to Nottingham, there were more accommodation structures at the start, a figure of 50.

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increased in the subsequent year.

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, in 2002, the

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fell to approximately 25. In the next 3

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more homes were built until 2006. Interestingly, 2006 and 2008 had the least buildings put up. By 2009, 250 homes were erected in

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