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A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for 3 months. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: – give details of what you know about his company. – explain your current situation. – Give your answer to the offer and explain why

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Dear Tom, I hope you're fine. I got your letter yesterday and I'm so thankful to you because you remembered the promise that you gave me the previous year. I can't still believe, I received an offer from your company. I know your firm is international and only selects good skilled employees. Recently, I read an article about your company that it owns more than 100 offices around the globe. Being a part of that will be a great opportunity, I believe. As you may be aware, I started a new work here in London and their notice period for resignation is two months. I don't think I'll be able to join your firm before that.
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, my girl is going to school here, her classes will finish after three months. I hope you understand my situation. If you explain my situation to your manager, it may help to hold that position, I believe, because I don't want to lose that job. Working in your renowned firm is my dream job. I'm eagerly waiting to hear from you soon. With Love, Jude
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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