some people say History is one of most important school subjects other people think that, in today world,subject like science and technology are more important than History. discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
With
increasing
number of job Add an article
an increasing
the increasing
opportunity
and population in the country, the choice for the students in choosing their Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
subjects
has become debatable. People say history is more important than the
other Correct article usage
apply
subjects
. While
others argue that in the modern world
, science
plays an important role in ruling this
world
with technology. In my opinion I feel both the subjects
serves
their own purposes, Correct subject-verb agreement
serve
therefore
they are equally important.
History as a subject
, it
is Correct pronoun usage
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extremely
useful Add an article
an extremely
subject
for those who are interested in the field of arts and politic s
. Correct your spelling
politics
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it
individual
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individuals
how
the country has survived Change preposition
on how
via
tremendous trouble and Change preposition
through
then
it gives and
information on how to go about in the future. Correct word choice
apply
For instance
, great
leader of India, Add an article
the great
a great
Mahathma
Gandi Correct your spelling
Mahatma
has
regained its independence from Unnecessary verb
apply
British
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the British
by
his Change preposition
through
non violent
strategy. Add a hyphen
non-violent
This
strategy is implemented in the daily lives of many people these days and by some freedom fighters. For them
it is so important and they feel it can rule the continent.
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,them
On the other hand
, science
subjects
are said to be modern subjects
that
is
dominating the Change the verb form
are
world
. More and more people are becoming more interested in this
filed
as more employment Correct your spelling
field
opportunity
have Fix the agreement mistake
opportunities
been emerged
in Change to the active voice
emerged
this
area. For example
, go to hospital
you see doctors, Add an article
the hospital
a hospital
nurses
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and nurses
they
are from Correct pronoun usage
who
science
background and go to Add an article
a science
construction
site you see machine operators and engineers Correct article usage
a construction
they
come from the same background, in Correct pronoun usage
who
short
every field is covered with the Add the comma(s)
,short
science
knowledge therefore
, all those job enthusiast
considers Change the determiner
enthusiasts
science
as the most important subject
in this
modern world
. In my opinion
I feel both the Add a comma
,opinion
subjects
are equally important depending upon how they serve the purposes.
In a nutshell, in this
technological world
, science
subject
is considered dominant, however
; for the purpose of its independence, portraying of
its cultural inheritance and security history Change preposition
apply
on the other hand
is equally valuable. Hence
they are both indispensable to the modern school subject
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Provide more specific examples and evidence to support your arguments.
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