Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Recently, there
is
an argument about the importance of experts' work arrangements. The proponents believe that they must only serve in the nation where they previously performed their studies and Wrong verb form
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trainings
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training
pieces of training
whereas
the opponents counter this
view. From my perspective, I opine that professionals
should be free to work in any destination according to
their will.
To begin
with, some people lean towards the thinking that these professionals
should give back to the country that had nurtured them as a form of gratitude. Some nations, mostly the developed ones, invest outrageous amount
of their national budget to fund Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
educations
and Fix the agreement mistake
education
researches
. Fix the agreement mistake
research
For instance
, Germany's Government has been supporting engineers from over
the world to study advanced engineering there since Rephrase
all over
early
2000s. Change the article
the early
For
this
reason, some parties suggest that those trained professionals
should dedicate their service to improve
the investing country.
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On the other hand
, some communities oppose the debate due to
the possibility of worsening inequality if such
regulation does
implemented. Verb problem
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Majority
of developing countries Correct article usage
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are
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of
bright experts, Change preposition
apply
thus
, expecting their people to study abroad in order to acquire enhanced acumen. For example
, the
Indonesia's Ministry of Finance allocated 30% of its yearly budget for post-graduate scholarships with more than ten Correct article usage
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thousands
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thousand
of
residents going Change preposition
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overseas
overseas each year. If these students are not allowed to get back to their Rephrase
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home-countries
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home countries
odds
are high that the Correct article usage
the odds
brain-drain
will cause Correct your spelling
brain drain
more
detrimental disparity between countries in the world.
In conclusion, both views of Add an article
a more
this
debate have their merits. On balance, nevertheless
, I firmly think that the benefit of letting these experts decide their preferred places to minister outweigh its drawback
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drawbacks
At the end
of the day, the world will be a better place if outstanding professionals
are diversified equally to all nations.Submitted by gabrichristie on
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