Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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an argument about the importance of experts' work arrangements. The proponents believe that they must only serve in the nation where they previously performed their studies and

trainings

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whereas

the opponents counter

this

view. From my perspective, I opine that

professionals

should be free to work in any destination

according to

their will.

To begin

with, some people lean towards the thinking that these

professionals

should give back to the country that had nurtured them as a form of gratitude. Some nations, mostly the developed ones, invest outrageous

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of their national budget to fund

educations

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education

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and

researches

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research

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.

For instance

, Germany's Government has been supporting engineers from

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the world to study advanced engineering there since

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2000s.

For

this

reason, some parties suggest that those trained

professionals

should dedicate their service to

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the investing country.

On the other hand

, some communities oppose the debate

due to

the possibility of worsening inequality if

such

regulation

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implemented.

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of developing countries

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lack

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bright experts,

thus

, expecting their people to study abroad in order to acquire enhanced acumen.

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Indonesia's Ministry of Finance allocated 30% of its yearly budget for post-graduate scholarships with more than ten

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of

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residents going

overseas

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overseas each year. If these students are not allowed to get back to their

home-countries

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home countries

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,

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are high that the

brain-drain

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will cause

more

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detrimental disparity between countries in the world. In conclusion, both views of

this

debate have their merits. On balance,

nevertheless

, I firmly think that the benefit of letting these experts decide their preferred places to minister outweigh its

drawback

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drawbacks

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.

At the end

of the day, the world will be a better place if outstanding

professionals

are diversified equally to all nations.