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you one
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apply
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there is no
age
for learning and teaching. We all
have
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apply
show examples
take
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make
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some
times
wrong
decisions
in our
lives
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education
is our
backbone
which is really required for all
age
groups
not only
their
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in their
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knowledge
but
also
their
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for their
show examples
bright
future
. -I just tell
one
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you one
show examples
thing
that
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apply
show examples
there is no
age
for learning and teaching. We all
have
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apply
show examples
take
Correct your spelling
make
show examples
some
times
wrong
decisions
in our
lives
but
education
is our
backbone
which is really required for all
age
groups
not only
their
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in their
show examples
knowledge
but
also
their
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for their
show examples
bright
future
. -I just tell
one
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you one
show examples
thing
that
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apply
show examples
there is no
age
for learning and teaching. We all
have
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
take
Correct your spelling
make
show examples
some
times
wrong
decisions
in our
lives
but
education
is our
backbone
which is really required for all
age
groups
not only
their
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in their
show examples
knowledge
but
also
their
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for their
show examples
bright
future
. -I just tell
one
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you one
show examples
thing
that
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apply
show examples
there is no
age
for learning and teaching. We all
have
Unnecessary verb
apply
show examples
take
Correct your spelling
make
show examples
some
times
wrong
decisions
in our
lives
but
education
is our
backbone
which is really required for all
age
groups
not only
their
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in their
show examples
knowledge
but
also
their
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for their
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bright
future
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