The chart below illustrates the result of a British survey on the types of houses people liked, taken in 2005.
The diagram gives information about the outcome of
a
research about the choices of housing carried out in Britain in the year 2005.
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Overall
it is immediately evident that flats
are the most common structures in London whilst detached houses
are in Cambridge. Oxford has a fair distribution of the various types of housing.
To begin
with, flats
are the most popular type of structure in all 3 cities. In London, nearly 60% of abodes owned by the people is
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are
flats
. Half of this
number belongs to people inhabiting Oxford. Whereas
, only 20% of the housing system at Cambridge is flats
.
With regards to terraced houses
, it is the least popular design type with each of the 3 towns recording below 20% of their coverage.
Turning to detached houses
, these are more popular in Cambridge at 35%. 10% less of this
figure is recorded as the area covered by such
buildings in Oxford. Interestingly, these two cities have the same proportions of semi-detached buildings at approximately 28%. London on the other hand
, has the least of these structure designs with about 18% of semi-detached abodes and only 8% of detached houses
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