The chart below illustrates the result of a British survey on the types of houses people liked, taken in 2005.

The chart below illustrates the result of a British survey on the types of houses people

liked, taken in 2005.
The diagram gives information about the outcome of
a
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research about the choices of housing carried out in Britain in the year 2005.
Overall
it is immediately evident that
flats
are the most common structures in London whilst detached
houses
are in Cambridge. Oxford has a fair distribution of the various types of housing.
To begin
with,
flats
are the most popular type of structure in all 3 cities. In London, nearly 60% of abodes owned by the people
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designed as
flats
. Half of
this
number belongs to people inhabiting Oxford.
Whereas
, only 20% of the housing system at Cambridge is
flats
. With regards to terraced
houses
, it is the least popular design type with each of the 3 towns recording below 20% of their coverage. Turning to detached
houses
, these are more popular in Cambridge at 35%. 10% less of
this
figure is recorded as the area covered by
such
buildings in Oxford. Interestingly, these two cities have the same proportions of semi-detached buildings at approximately 28%. London
on the other hand
, has the least of these structure designs with about 18% of semi-detached abodes and only 8% of detached
houses
.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words flats, houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey
  • illustrates
  • result
  • British
  • types of houses
  • people
  • liked
  • taken
  • 2005
  • chart
  • popular
  • least popular
  • description
  • discussion
  • summary
  • key findings
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