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some observers say that police officers should be recruited from the communities where they work so that they have local knowledge, other people believe that this is unnecessary. when do you stand on this debate? is local knowledge essential in modern policing

#observers #police #officers #communities #work #people #debate
At present, police
officers
 are paramount in society,
therefore
 they have to know local skills and they work in their
hometown
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. Others firmly believe that it is useless. There are strong arguments for debate. Arguably, there could be reasons why all local society
need
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 policemen to understand the minutiae.
Initially
, if individuals work in
local
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community
 as policemen, the proportion of crime will be
decline
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 by
officers
 because they possess data in regards to many inhabitants.
Furthermore
, local
officers
 can find it easier to attain informants in the
community
, leading to stronger evidence
at
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 traits, fines or
community
 service leading to
rehabilitation
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 of
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the offender
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offender
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. Foremost among other challenges appear to be more issues of
community
 condition as
officer
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officers
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, who may in fact share some of
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 of the people they
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 up with
as a result
 we encounter
in
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eclectic types of awful
occasion
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such
 as corruption, which is common among the local business
as well as
 government
community
. A second objection is that local sensitivity may pose to the police failing to enforce laws fully, and effectively making exceptions for the purpose of offenders, which is
unequitable
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 towards law-abiding citizens. To exemplify, in the USA, there are so many crimes of life
due to
locally
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 police. In a nutshell, it seems to me that local knowledge is not absolutely vital for the
officers
, whose panaches should be effective in any context. Indeed, I totally agree that
risks
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 of local recruitment outweigh the
advantageous
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, owing to
danger
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the danger
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 of bribery and over-familiarity with potential offenders.
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