The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given charts present a detailed process of making

glass

from raw material.

To begin

with, there are approximately 12 steps

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the whole procedure. First and foremost is, putting raw material in

Furnace

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a Furnace

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and

heat

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heating

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it at 105 Celsius which results in hot

glass

. After that, hot

glass

pressing is done in Mould 1. It is shaped into

thick

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a thick

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wall container by pressing.

Next,

in mould 2 container filled with air.

According to

chart

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the chart

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, air filled container

then

goes

in to

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into

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heating

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the heating

a heating

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machine and

heated

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is heated

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at 482 Celsius. Following that,

crockery

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the crockery

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goes

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into

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cooling

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a cooling

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machine and cools at 25 degrees Celsius. Prior to packaging and distribution inspection of ready

glass

occurs. All the waste material goes into waste and the standard

glass

goes for packaging and

finally

to distributors.

To conclude

, making

glass

containers is

lengthy

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a lengthy

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process and there are

approx

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approximately

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12 steps from heating raw materials to distribution.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words glass with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

150 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Container
Melting furnace
Molten glass
Gob
Conveyor belt
Mold
Cooling
Annealing
Finishing touches
Quality inspection
Packaging
Distribution
Automated
Environmental impact
Temperature control
Glassware
Manufacturing process
Perfection
Impurities
Recycling

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The diagram shows a method of shaping glass containers. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors and there is a lack of a sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?

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