Although
some people think that putting
animals
into
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suitable behaviour as
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human
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, others believe that zoos are
for entertainment activities and
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some benefits from
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the ecological
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point.
This
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.
On the one hand, children spend their free time with their families in zoos and gain valuable insights about wildlife. In
this
way, governments generate
from entrance and invest
this
money into different important areas
such
as health and education.
Also
, those places have rehabilitation
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and special breeding programs for endangered species.
Furthermore
, they collect eggs and sperm from those
animals
and make
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environment and produce that species again before
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nature.
On the other hand
,
animals
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live in nature not in buildings
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made by humans. In the jungle, they
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to travel
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of kilometers for hunting or reaching
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water
.
In addition
to that, most of them are social creatures
as well as
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together. When
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into close areas, they
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do those activities and it ends
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health
.
For example
, dolphins are one of the only
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that can kill themself and
last
year three
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suicide in one zoo located in
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because of
.
In conclusion,
while
zoos have several benefits for both governments and nature view,
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drawbacks
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up with
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. Those reasons continue to
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this
topic as a discussion field in society.