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Students are asked to work short time without pay as a part of their education. Is this more of an advantage or a disadvantage to student and company ?

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Nowadays, there is a great demand for candidates with prior
work
 experience, almost everywhere and for
this
 sole reason several educational institutions
involves
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 internship programs in their curriculum.
This
 essay will discuss the upsides and downsides of
students
 working without
salary
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a salary
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 for a
small
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short
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 period of
time
 in accordance with their educational
institue
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institution
.
To begin
 with, it is really advantageous for the youth to
work
 for
sometime
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some time
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 during their
time
 in university in view of the fact that
this
 offers them various benefits,
such
 as hands-on
work
 experience,
networking
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and networking
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 opportunities and they get to familiarize themselves with the working environment.
Students
 do not want to miss a chance which can boost their curriculum vitae and resume. For companies, it is a good opportunity to provide training periods from
time
 to
time
 as they might come across many promising candidates and they can offer them permanent positions.
Moreover
, it is
a
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cheap labour for many firms as they are not obligated to pay salaries to
students
. Albeit, it can be disadvantageous
due to
 the fact that
work
 can become burdensome for
students
 and they might feel overwhelmed
,
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 if they are unable to manage their
time
accordingly
 with their
university's
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university
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 studies.
Furthermore
, in most
scenarios
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students
 are not paid or they might get a meager salary compared to the
work
 they have to deal with which can be quite tiresome. If corporations are running
such
 schemes,
then
 they have to establish
dedicated
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a dedicated
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 wing for
internship
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internships
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 and
this
 can cost them capital, labour and
time
.
To conclude
, there are several merits and demerits
,
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 when it comes to
such
 apprenticeship programs. But
it's
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its
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 benefits outweighs the disbenefits as candidates can get
an
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apply
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exposure
of
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to
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working
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a working
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 environment
along with
 practical knowledge and companies might get to hire talented trainee and they don't want to
loose
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lose
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 that chance.
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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • internship
  • practical experience
  • hands-on learning
  • professional skills
  • networking opportunities
  • workplace environment
  • industry knowledge
  • resume
  • career prospects
  • financial burden
  • exploitation
  • cheap labor
  • ethical concerns
  • labor laws
  • fair compensation
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