The graph below shows information about the use of public transport in one coutry, by age group and location of residence, in 2016.
The graph provides the
percentage
of public transport
used by different age
groups and location
of residence in 2016.
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Overall
, large city
residents
used public transport
more than other residents
.
It can be clearly seen that almost 40% of big city
residents
aged 0-15 used public transport
while
only a minority of other residents
did the same. Also
there is a significant growth of public Add a comma
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transport
users among 16-45 year old large city
residents
. Other residents
of
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aged
age
16-30 used public transport
slightly more than other residents
aged 31-45.
According to
the data there is a sharp decline of
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in
percentage
between age
groups of 31-45 and 61-75, while
the percentage
of other residents
aged 31-45 and 46-60 using public transport
stabilized at 15%. Other residents
at
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aged
age
61-75 are the only age
group that used public transport
more than large city
residents
. After a fall of
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in
percentage
of public transport
users living in big city
residences at age
61-75, there is a minimal escalation, while
the percentage
of public transport
using other residents
slowly rose.Submitted by zhadyra.serikbayeva2016 on
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