The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The process diagram depicts the way
honey
is made by bees
.
Overall
, it is clear that
honey
-making is a seasonal process, and is highly advantageous to the environment. There are seven main steps, beginning with bees
building a hive and culminating when the honey
is produced and ready to distribute.
Firstly
, the beehive (a special container where bees
live) is constructed by the bees
, then
once flowers start to bloom, the sweet liquid that flowers produce is collected by them , which in other words
is called pollination. Afterwards gathered nectar is placed into the cells of the bees
’ container, where the production begins.
Consequently
, the air is distributed throughout the cells for honey
to cool down by bees
flapping their wings, following evaporation of water in the nectar that changes to gas. Eventually, honey
is made and is either placed in jars or gathered as a whole honeycomb that is
ready for sale.Submitted by belchicovaa on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words honey, bees with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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