The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates how bees produce honey.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The process diagram depicts the way
honey
is made by
bees
.
Overall
,
it is clear that
honey
-making is a seasonal process, and is highly advantageous to the environment. There are seven main steps, beginning with
bees
building a hive and culminating when the
honey
is produced and ready to distribute.
Firstly
, the beehive (a special container where
bees
live) is constructed by the
bees
,
then
once flowers start to bloom, the sweet liquid that flowers produce is collected by them , which
in other words
is called pollination. Afterwards gathered nectar is placed into the cells of the
bees
’ container, where the production begins.
Consequently
, the air is distributed throughout the cells for
honey
to cool down by
bees
flapping their wings, following evaporation of water in the nectar that changes to gas. Eventually,
honey
is made and is either placed in jars or gathered as a whole honeycomb
that is
ready for sale.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words honey, bees with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Metamorphosis
  • Nectar
  • Foraging
  • Pollination
  • Worker bees
  • House bees
  • Honey stomach
  • Honeycomb cells
  • Beeswax
  • Evaporation
  • Hexagon-shaped
  • Simple sugars
  • Enzymes
  • Capping
  • Preserve
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