You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society? You should write at least 250 words.

In recent days , more and more

students

choose to study other subjects

such

as commerce and business other than

science

. I believe that fewer opportunities and lower

salary

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salaries

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compare

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compared

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to other industries are the main reasons behind

this

phenomenon. In

this

essay

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I will go through those reasons in deep

as well as

the effects of

such

phenomenon

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a phenomenon

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. There are many reasons that cause

less

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fewer

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students

willing to take

science

as

major

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a major

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. One of them is

job

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a job

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vacancy.

While there

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is

less job

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fewer jobs

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available to

science

graduate than other graduate

such

as commerce. More

students

are

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therefore

choose to go for commerce or business units other than

science

.

Furthermore

,

science related

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science-related

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jobs

are usually have

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lower

salary

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salaries

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than business sectors.

While

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salary

is one of the major

factor

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when deciding career.

Thus

, less and less

students

choose to study

science

.

As a result

of reduced interest in

science

education. It will lead to a shortage of individuals with expertise in

science

, technology, engineering, and mathematics fields.

This

skills gap can have negative impacts on industries that rely on these skills,

such

as technology, healthcare, and engineering. In

additon

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addition

, in a globalized world, countries that invest in

science

and technology tend to be more competitive. A decline in

science

education may lead to a loss of competitiveness on the international stage. In conclusion ,

students

choose not to study

science

mainly

due to

lack

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a lack

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of opportunities and low

salary

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salaries

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. With

less

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fewer

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and

less

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fewer

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science

graduate

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graduates

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,

the

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apply

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society will

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be suffered

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suffered

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by

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from

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shortage

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a shortage

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of expertise in some areas and become less competitive.