The graphs below show data on Australian trades with three other countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graphs illustrate information about
Australia
’s level of Use synonyms
imports
and exports with Use synonyms
China
, Use synonyms
Japan
, and the United Use synonyms
States
from 2002 to 2008.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it is readily apparent from the graphs that Linking Words
Australia
exported more to the United Use synonyms
States
and Use synonyms
Japan
than that of its Use synonyms
imports
. Use synonyms
However
, the bilateral Linking Words
trade
between Use synonyms
Australia
and Use synonyms
China
followed a different trend.
Use synonyms
Although
Linking Words
Australia
’s Use synonyms
Use synonyms
export
to Fix the agreement mistake
exports
Japan
began at 40 and remained stable until 2005, Use synonyms
it
reached Correct pronoun usage
they
the
peak Correct article usage
a
61
in 2006, followed by a steady decline to around 50 in 2008. Change preposition
of 61
However
, when it comes to Linking Words
trade
with the United Use synonyms
States
, Use synonyms
Australia
’s Use synonyms
Use synonyms
export
always remained double (40) than that of its Fix the agreement mistake
exports
Use synonyms
import
(20) and stayed stable until 2006, when both Fix the agreement mistake
imports
imports
and exports started rising gradually.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
Linking Words
initially
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,initially
Australia
exported more (40) to Use synonyms
China
than that of its Use synonyms
imports
(30), and the Use synonyms
export
remained the dominant player until 2008 when the level of Use synonyms
Use synonyms
import
from Fix the agreement mistake
imports
China
exceeded that of the Use synonyms
export
and kept rising Use synonyms
sharp
. In fact, Change the word
sharply
this
bilateral Linking Words
trade
surplus for Use synonyms
Australia
reached Use synonyms
at
its maximum in 2005 when the amount of Change preposition
apply
import
plummeted to Use synonyms
the
lowest point (20.) Change the word
its
Finally
, the Linking Words
trade
with the United Use synonyms
States
was mostly stable with Use synonyms
a
Correct article usage
apply
consistent
higher Change the word
consistently
Use synonyms
export
, with Fix the agreement mistake
exports
Japan
it went through an unstable Use synonyms
export
dominance, but in the end, Use synonyms
Australia
failed to restrain the steep rise of Use synonyms
import
from Use synonyms
China
.Use synonyms
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