The graphs below show data on Australian trades with three other countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The line graphs illustrate information about
Australia
’s level of imports
and exports with China
, Japan
, and the United States
from 2002 to 2008.
Overall
, it is readily apparent from the graphs that Australia
exported more to the United States
and Japan
than that of its imports
. However
, the bilateral trade
between Australia
and China
followed a different trend.
Although
Australia
’s export
to Fix the agreement mistake
exports
Japan
began at 40 and remained stable until 2005, it
reached Correct pronoun usage
they
the
peak Correct article usage
a
61
in 2006, followed by a steady decline to around 50 in 2008. Change preposition
of 61
However
, when it comes to trade
with the United States
, Australia
’s export
always remained double (40) than that of its Fix the agreement mistake
exports
import
(20) and stayed stable until 2006, when both Fix the agreement mistake
imports
imports
and exports started rising gradually.
On the other hand
, initially
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,initially
Australia
exported more (40) to China
than that of its imports
(30), and the export
remained the dominant player until 2008 when the level of import
from Fix the agreement mistake
imports
China
exceeded that of the export
and kept rising sharp
. In fact, Change the word
sharply
this
bilateral trade
surplus for Australia
reached at
its maximum in 2005 when the amount of Change preposition
apply
import
plummeted to the
lowest point (20.) Change the word
its
Finally
, the trade
with the United States
was mostly stable with a
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consistent
higher Change the word
consistently
export
, with Fix the agreement mistake
exports
Japan
it went through an unstable export
dominance, but in the end, Australia
failed to restrain the steep rise of import
from China
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