After the pandemic, many
people
want to
travel
more and the number of tours
have beenWrong verb form
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increased a lot. More
people
want to
travel
to difficult
conditions
like
SaharaCorrect article usage
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desert or
antarcticaChange the capitalization
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. There are many benefits and disadvantages of
people
visiting there.
Mentioning
about Change preposition
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benefits, we have to agree that there are
a lotsCorrect the article-noun agreement
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of advantages like discovering new
places
, environment, living
conditions
,
nature
... It is always pleasured,
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amazedReplace the word
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to visit those
places
, to realize how
of Change preposition
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the Correct article usage
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nature
, and of course to realize how small we are as
humanFix the agreement mistake
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among
the Correct article usage
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nature
.
People
have a chance to learn about
to know their
limitationFix the agreement mistake
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and how to survive in
such
difficult
conditions
. It gives
people
a challenge to
experience
, to evoke their
and continue to discover the world. Somehow travelling creates a chance to connect
people
with
people
, strange
people
become friends and to exchange culture and information among different lifestyles and countries. In a bigger picture, travelling is to support local
people
via tourist
. In
this
aspect, we can see many
people
have changed to better
conditions
and it affects
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of that country. Today there are many experts or
experienceCorrect pronoun usage
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those
places
and
filmingWrong verb form
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to show their
experience
about new
places
and techniques
to surviveChange preposition
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in
a Correct the article-noun agreement
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difficult
conditions
. Somehow it
helpChange the verb form
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those who cannot
travel
have
an opportunitiesCorrect the article-noun agreement
an opportunity
opportunities
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to explore the world that they cannot afford to go
becauseChange preposition
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of their capacity or financial capacity. On the other side, it
also
gives good techniques on how to survive in similar
conditions
. These are some good aspects of
experience
and visiting difficult
conditions
.
One important aspect we should
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areCorrect subject-verb agreement
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dangerousReplace the word
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. In order to
travel
there,
people
must be well prepared
aboutChange preposition
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knowledge, survival skills and body training in some unexpected cases. The
of mother
nature
is out of human control and in the past
people
had had bad
experienceFix the agreement mistake
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as
injureWrong verb form
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or even
payWrong verb form
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byChange preposition
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their
lifeFix the agreement mistake
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.
In conclusion, it is good to
travel
and discover new
places
or challenge
by visiting new
places
.
you should know
,
yourCorrect word choice
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capacity and
wellAdd a missing verb
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prepared before
travelCorrect your spelling
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. Going with a group is a must that you could
haveAdd the particle
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accompanyCorrect your spelling
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to go with and to support
in dangerous
.