The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governtments should invest funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement

Country
runners are spending lots of money in the fields of arts, drama and music.
On the contrary
, the government can utilize
this
money for the improvement of buses , national banks etcetera. I ,
however
,disagree with the latter as the promotion of a nation's culture
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, as well as the awareness of social issues,
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as well as
the awareness of social issues are possible
due to
the fields of cinema and numerous art forms only. To initiate , films and series native to a
country
are made on the basis of the prevalence of a particular culture . A famous short film of
India
, The Bulbul ,was set up in the era of the nineteenth century ,where males ruled predominately. It showed the painful issue of dowry
along with
marital rape and the latter was not talked about openly. But after its release,
this
movie created havoc not only in
India
but
also
worldwide. The oppressed ladies came out openly, arranged rallies and started asking for justice and it was reported that many got the same too.
Moreover
, spending a handsome amount of money in the field of music by promoting it through famous artists fetches viewers from every corner of the world. To illustrate , a famous music carnival of
India
that is
held in Delhi every year attracts millions of listeners not only from
India
,
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but
also
from around the globe ,which directly adds to the economy of the province. Not only
this
,it
also
promotes tourism as visitors would travel to famous locations of the
country
like The Taj Mahal and the Golden Temple.
Thus
, benefitting the organisers ,the singers as well and the government in the form of taxes.
To conclude
, artistic fields like jazz,classics ,bhangra , and dramas are pivotal for a
country
because they bring laurels to the
country
making it famous among its contemporaries and playing a leading role in the growth of a region.
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