The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram highlights the process by which electricity is produced through geothermal energy.
Overall
, it is clear from the diagram that there are five different stages which are required to generate electrical power.
Additionally
, there is a pylon to transfer produced electricity to cities and buildings. By focusing on the left side of the process, we can see there is a tank for cold
water
.
This
cold
water
is pumped down around 4.5 kilometres to the injection well in the second stage.
Then
it passes through the geothermal zone, which consists of hot rocks, and
then
reaches the production well at the third step. After that, the cold
water
whose temperature
increased
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by the geothermal zone pumped up to a condenser at stage 4 and the steam of
this
hot
water
passes through a narrow corridor to reach the turbine. There are two main machines in the
last
stage which are the turbine and a generator in order. The turbine is powered by produced steam and rotates to give energy to the generator which will lead to producing electricity through the generator.
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