Some people believe that studying at university or collge is the best route to a soccessful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job staight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
There is an increasingly popular idea that the best way to a successful career is studying at a university or college.
While
others think that getting a job
straight after school
is more effective. Both opinions may have benefits and drawbacks from this
trend, from my point of view, I think that getting a job
right after graduation is more useful.
On the one hand, there is a variety of reasons why people
have a tendency to choose to continue their education after school
. First,
a college education will provide young people
with the necessary qualifications, which are needed to have a good job
in many companies. Having a college will probably get a much higher salary than those without a university education. Furthermore
, the job
market is becoming more and more competitive. Having a degree is a standard term to get the top jobs. For example
, graduated engineers and programmers in Vietnam are highly paid and easy to get a top job
.
On the other hand
, I believe that working straight after high school
is beneficial in some ways. Firstly
, young people
are able to earn money as soon as possible. So that they can live independently on their own income, which can prove one’s maturity. Secondly
, youngsters who choose to work right after leaving high school
will have more experience, which help them work effectively and know how to choose a suitable job
in the future, such
as a career requiring a high standard of soft skills and attitude.
In conclusion, although
studying in
university will give me more knowledge and allow young Change preposition
at
people
to get a well-paid career, I contend that getting a gap year for work or travelling right after graduation will provide more experience and Skills to deal with problems in real-life tasks.Submitted by phamnhung275 on
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