Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Parents
who sent
their Wrong verb form
send
children
in
non-Change preposition
to
government
schools should not be
pay income tax and Unnecessary verb
apply
government
should help their Correct article usage
the government
children
education system. I totally agree with Change noun form
children's
this
statement and my further
justification will come in further
paragraphs along with
some relative examples.
To commence with, families who pay high amount
of Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
money
in public school
should not pay any Fix the agreement mistake
schools
taxes
there are several reasons behind this
. Firstly
, they already contribute in
their Change preposition
to
country
economy because they pay Change noun form
country's
high
amount of Correct article usage
a high
money
in
only education system which is beneficial for all Change preposition
for
the
Correct article usage
apply
sector
. Fix the agreement mistake
sectors
For instance
, those children
who study in private school
they
pay Correct pronoun usage
apply
high
Correct word choice
apply
money
to school
which directely
goes to the administration and help Correct your spelling
directly
country
Correct article usage
the country
growth
. Replace the word
grow
Secondly
, the teachers who earn money
for public school
also
pay taxes
to direct the government
which means the administration take
twice Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
taxes
from various sources which is not good for families. Lastly
, all staff members of school
earn Correct article usage
the school
money
from their parents
which also
they
pay Correct pronoun usage
apply
taxes
in other form
Change the wording
another form
other forms
it
means Correct pronoun usage
which
parents
not
required to pay any Add a missing verb
are not
taxes
to the government
.
On the other hand
, as per the goverment
Correct your spelling
government
policy
all citizens need to pay Add a comma
policy,
taxes
to the administration because it is their choice wheather
their Correct your spelling
whether
children
study in Correct article usage
a govenrment
govenrment
Correct your spelling
government
school
or private
Correct article usage
a private
school
. Additionally
, the government
already
Add a missing verb
has already
open
many Replace the word
opened
school
in my cities and Change to a plural noun
schools
free
of education Add a missing verb
is free
provide
so no need to go Verb problem
apply
in
public Change preposition
to
school
.
To give an overview, public Fix the agreement mistake
schools
school
children
's parents
Add a missing verb
do no
no
need to pay Correct your spelling
not
taxes
to the government
because they already pay in advance. However
, as per government
rule
all citizens need to pay Add a comma
rule,
taxes
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