The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accomodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

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The bar chart illustrates the data on ownership and rental of household appliances as a percentage,
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in England and Wales, from 1918 to 2011k.
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, it can be clearly seen that
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the percentage of households rented showed a downward trend,
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, household equipment ownership experienced an upward trend over the given time duration. In 1918, 78% of household items were rented by the citizens in England and Wales.
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figure experienced a gradual decrease up to around 36% after a century. Before a slight increase in 2011, it fell rapidly.
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, between 1939 and 1953, nearly 68% of people used equipment not owned by them.
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take a look at the proportion of appliances owned, which accounted for 22% in the beginning. In the following three
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it made up just above one-third of the percentage of the total. Interestingly, both figures were the same in 1971 at almost 50%.
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, in previous decades, there was a slight decline in the ownership of the equipment needed for homework in 20011.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • households
  • owned accommodation
  • rented accommodation
  • England
  • Wales
  • chart
  • between
  • trends
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuate
  • rise
  • fall
  • peak
  • significant
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • steady
  • dramatic
  • overall
  • range from
  • at the beginning of
  • at the end of
  • over the period
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