Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion

Nowadays, few individuals choose to forgo

meat

and

fish

in their diet, thinking that

this

will not only benefit their

health

but

also

confers

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advantageous effects across the globe. I strongly agree with

this

opinion because these days

there

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they are

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made through fast breeding and can have

impact

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an impact

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on our lives.

Firstly

, it is evident that consuming

meat

and

fish

will

provide

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meet

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nutritional

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the nutritional

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needs

for

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of

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the

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human beings. It is because

fish

is rich in omega-3 fatty acids,

whereas

meat

has high contents of protein. Indeed, it can be challenging to get these nutrients from alternative sources.

For example

, many doctors suggest elderly people

to

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take omega-3 food items for their well-being.

On the other hand

, the sellers are injecting steroids

inorder

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in order

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to increase

the

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fish

and

meat

production.

In other words

, with the increase in population, the number of people who consume

meat

and

fish

had

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also

grown, leading to more production of them.

Hence

, the farm workers are injecting steroids to make them grow quickly.

For instance

, researchers said that by induced breeding they

are lacking

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their minerals and nutrients and

also

stated public can

detrimental

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have detrimental

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effects on the

health

of both

human kind

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humankind

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and animals.

To sum up

, I strongly agree that it is better to prioritize good

health

over exposing

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overexposing

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ourselves to unnecessary

health

risks.

Moreover

, by reducing

meat

and

fish

consumption, we can potentially mitigate the negative impacts associated with excessive consumption of these products,

such

as

health

issues and environmental concerns.

This

reduction may contribute to a decrease in

rapid

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breeding of animals for food production, thereby yielding benefits for the global ecosystem as a whole.