Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holidays explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

Dear Annie and Sanam, Hope you
both
are well. I'
m
writing
this
to thank you
both
for the picture and definitely for the
trip
. First of all, thanks a lot for the vacation and
specially
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for the picture. Yesterday, I saw all the pictures, and I was feeling that I was reliving those days.
Also
, the one which we all took in front of
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Tower, I'll definitely frame it for my bedroom's wall. I'
m
really sorry for not writing a letter after I came back. As you know, I took
a long holidays
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from my office, which is why
I'd
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a
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plenty of tasks pending, and my manager told me to complete all
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that
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them
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within a week. So I was a busy bee
from
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last
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1 week. Plus, next month I'
m
planning a
trip
to Kashmir, which I know is
also
Annie's dream destination. So why don't you
both
join me? It's a
week long
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trip
, and I'
m
hiring three Royal Enfield bikes. I reckon
,
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it'll be a fun
trip
with a lot of adventurous roads. Hoping to see you
both
soon. Best regards, Jaskaran
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