Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the photos and for the holidays explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

#month #holiday #friends #photos #holidays

Dear Annie and Sanam, Hope you

both

are well. I'

writing

this

to thank you

both

for the picture and definitely for the

trip

. First of all, thanks a lot for the vacation and

specially

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especially

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for the picture. Yesterday, I saw all the pictures, and I was feeling that I was reliving those days.

Also

, the one which we all took in front of

Eiffel

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the Eiffel

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Tower, I'll definitely frame it for my bedroom's wall. I'

really sorry for not writing a letter after I came back. As you know, I took

a long holidays

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a long holiday

long holidays

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from my office, which is why

I'd

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I had

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apply

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plenty of tasks pending, and my manager told me to complete all

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of that

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that

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them

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within a week. So I was a busy bee

from

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for

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last

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the last

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1 week. Plus, next month I'

planning a

trip

to Kashmir, which I know is

also

Annie's dream destination. So why don't you

both

join me? It's a

week long

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week-long

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trip

, and I'

hiring three Royal Enfield bikes. I reckon

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apply

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it'll be a fun

trip

with a lot of adventurous roads. Hoping to see you

both

soon. Best regards, Jaskaran

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

186 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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