The graph given below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features
The given line graph depicts information about
a
number of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002 with four different transport systems. Units measured in millions.
Correct article usage
the
Overall
, the road was all time on peak until the end
, meanwhile, the pipeline was at its minimum position.
It can be clearly seen that road started from nearly 70 million
, had some fluctuations and in the end
reached approximately 100 million
tonnes. Moreover
, a pipeline from about 5 million
increased to 20 million
, however
, had the smallest quantity of tone.
It can be clearly observed that goods water and rail started from an approximately similar positions
and until the Correct the article-noun agreement
an approximately similar position
approximately similar positions
end
, they improved almost similarly
, but in the end
, the difference between them was around 20 tonnes.
It is interesting to note that water and rail grew almost identically, and intersected only one time in 1978 year. In addition
, in the beginning, rail was a little bit leader, however
, with mild changes in the end
the leadership point remained water.Submitted by aikumarbekarys on
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