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Some children can learn more efficiently by watching TV. Therefore, children should watch TV regularly both in school and at home? Do you agree or disagree?

#children #tv #school #home
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 thread of
technology
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,technology
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 there is discussion around
efficiently
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children
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children's
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education
 via
TV
 at various places. Lack of exceptional teaching
way
 and low amount of information can be
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problem
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problems
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 of
such
way
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 to get knowledge. But in another hand, it can be quite simple to dive into a science field and explore new. First of all,
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young
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a young
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 age must get
basic
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a basic
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education
around
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 all areas and each of them
need
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 to unique method of learning.
The television
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Television
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 can give basic
education
, but it cannot guarantee
quality
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the quality
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 of
expirience
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experience
,
due to
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a lack
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 of
individually
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 coordination.
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 example,
pupil
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pupils
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 may collect new knowledge faster than others. That will cause
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him to get
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 bored
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him
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. In that
way
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 he wants
learn
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to learn
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 deeper.
Next
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 main argument is
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a low
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 amount of information. Any
TV
 program has schedules and a limitation of time. In that
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 channels can not give
proper
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the proper
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 volume of theory, or they need to
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compress
compass
 fully, which can be misunderstandable for auditory. Opposite of
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, books can give more variety of experience and they feel free to fill pages with any content. Specifical channels like Discovery,
BBC
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and BBC
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oriented
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are oriented
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 to share wide knowledge around
chosen
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a chosen
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 topic. It can be good for learners. But
due to
 age
category
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 they cannot
massively
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be massively
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 involved
to
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in
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 educational
TV
 series.
Although
books
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book's
books'
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 capacity
of
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for
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 information
comparable
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is comparable
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 with
there
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their
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chanells
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channels
,
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the scheduilg
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scheduilg
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scheduling
schedule
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on
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the
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television can break interest. Despite of significant volume of
knowldege
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knowledge
 in
TV
 programs it has limitations in time and
lacked of
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lacks
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 individual
coordication
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coordination
. I believe watching
TV
is
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supports
traditionally
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education
 and it can be helpful
while
 exploring new
horizonts
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horizons
 of science.
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