The internet has become profoundly effcient and popular that people choose it as a platform to learn.Some believe that it would eventually replace the need for books.Do you agree or disagree?

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one of
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precious inventions in the
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modern
world ,and it is often argued ,that e-
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and online
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virtual platforms
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than
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in the future.Here, I completely agree with
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opinion by analyzing the numerous
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ideas among
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the around world
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relatively low cost and the
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availability
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cyberspace is a vital modern finding ,which used to interconnect the
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global
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,people who have been living in
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remote and rural areas could improve their
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by sharing
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knowledge with other skill local or foreign communities by using virtual platforms.
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physical learning materials like
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Earth
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transportation
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factor for the
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development
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of humankind, and people who
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willingness
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to broaden their
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,the
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remote areas in Sri Lanka have been
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towards
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local and foreign online courses by using
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application ,and they used to find knowledge by
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associating
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groups than
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referring
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because
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the lack of
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and hard materials.
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,
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education format is highly
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valuable
for everyone in the world.
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cost effectiveness
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of online resources is a significant
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attraction
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any
persons
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person
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, the
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payment and other purchasing costs are
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lower than buying the
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due to
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reason people prefer to engage with live platforms.
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internet
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time saving
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hectic
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schedules
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recent research reveals ,that , nowadays most
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university
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students
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the
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electronic
books
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,
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videos and live study groups than
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to save
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money and time.
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one of enormous
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has been
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fomenting
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owing to its cheapness, effectiveness , easiness
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accessability
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accessibility
by linking
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global
citizens in numerous online live sessions as their
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requirements
.
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why I would prefer to move towards the
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internet
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by replacing
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.Even though
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there are
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considerable
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benefits
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books
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parents and elders should inculcate
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generation,that
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referring
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while
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using the
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which would be created balanced citizens with
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future.

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