The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given scheme gives information about the outcomes of research where individuals were asked why they relocated to a capital
city
of some country between 2000 and 2015.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the main reason was a job, whereas
the least common cause for moving to a bigger city
was the need for adventures
. Fix the agreement mistake
adventure
In addition
, throughout the whole given ,period the trend concerning those who travelled because of adventure plateaued.
Initially
, the number of people
who abandoned their homes due to
better education constituted approximately 25,000 students, however
since this
time and by the end of the observed timeline the figure had been increasing considerably. From 2000 to 2005, there were similar patterns regarding the situation of individuals who moved to a bigger city
because of family or friends, and adventure, which made up 10,000 people
each.
In 2005, there was a modest growth in the number of people
who moved because of their loved ones and by 2015 it constituted about 25,000 people
, which was more than three times as many as the number of those who moved to the capital city
due to
employment and studying during the same year. Meanwhile, there were identical figures concerning the two latter reasons for moving to another city
, which made up roughly 85,000 workers and pupils.Submitted by karolinavash2552 on
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