the tables below give information about sales of fairtraide labelled bananas and coffee

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demostrte

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demonstrates

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to us data about sales of

fairtraide

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fairtrade

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labelled bananas and

coffee

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, for

cofee

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coffee

2004th

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year

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succesful

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successful

than 1999, if we compare it with

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banana

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bananas

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. In

fact

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coffees

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sales advanced to

the

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all

country

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countries

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while

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banana's

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sales in Belgium and Sweden decreased.

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banana

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bananas

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bring

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the UK

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three times more than

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year,

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coffee's

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apply

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increase

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more almost 15 times. Next

coffee

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salers Switzerland doubled their result from

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year and have 6

million

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euros

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Also

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banana

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bananas

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have

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same result 5.5

million

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euros

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, but progress is impressive since

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start

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they sold only

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million

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euros

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. Subsequent countries which

sale

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coffee

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increased, despite their lower income. Denmark, Belgium and Sweden have two, one point seven and one

million

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euros

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respectively. For bananas only Denmark's income climbed up, meanwhile Belgium and Sweden dropped down. In conclusion in

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the UK

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the most popular

coffee

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and

banana

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trade. Others need to pay more attention to be like him

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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4 paragraphs

160 words

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the tables below give information about sales of fairtraide labelled bananas and coffee

University education should be restricted to the very best academic students, rather than being available to a large proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reasons for your answer.

Some people think that going to the gym is the best way to keep fit. Others think that there are many better methods. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that men and women have different qualities , therefore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

It is better for college students to live on campus than live at home with their parents. To what extent do you agree with this idea?