the tables below give information about sales of fairtraide labelled bananas and coffee

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demonstrates

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to us data about sales of

fairtraide

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fairtrade

fair trade

labelled bananas and

coffee

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, for

cofee

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coffee

2004th

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year

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succesful

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successful

than 1999, if we compare it with

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the banana

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banana

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bananas

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. In

fact

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coffees

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sales advanced to

the

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all

country

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countries

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while

banana's

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banana

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sales in Belgium and Sweden decreased.

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banana

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bananas

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bring

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the UK

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three times more than

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year,

whereas

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coffee

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apply

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increase

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more almost 15 times. Next

coffee

salers Switzerland doubled their result from

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year and have 6

million

euros

Also

banana

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bananas

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have

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the

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same result 5.5

million

euros

, but progress is impressive since

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start

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they sold only

million

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euros

. Subsequent countries which

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coffee

increased, despite their lower income. Denmark, Belgium and Sweden have two, one point seven and one

million

euros

respectively. For bananas only Denmark's income climbed up, meanwhile Belgium and Sweden dropped down. In conclusion in

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the UK

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the most popular

coffee

and

banana

trade. Others need to pay more attention to be like him

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the tables below give information about sales of fairtraide labelled bananas and coffee

students should pay the full cost for their own study , because university education benefits individuals rather than society . to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recent years, the number of crime committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. discuss this issues. give reasons and suggest some solutions.

Everyone of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?