Children today play very violent games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world. What are your opinions on this?

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children
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are playing extremely violent
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and it is often argued that
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is the reason for the rapid increase
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crime
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rate among
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large cities across the world. I
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disagree with
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opinion and think that
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's lifestyle and their human nature will make them criminals.
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, violence comes from human nature, like
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aggression
and irritation, but blaming violent video
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as the main cause is wrong. In the past, kids used to play
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involving real fights, but now they mostly play virtual
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. So,
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aren't making the world more violent, and
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's
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can't be blamed for more
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, there is no clear proof of how
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affect kids.
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, despite more than 20 years of investigation, researchers have failed to prove the connection between violent video
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and acts of violence. That's why
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will not
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children
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.
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, other factors like
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environment, social issues and mental health play
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in
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rates.
Crime
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rates are influenced by a complex interplay of various factors, including family upbringing, socioeconomic conditions, access to education, mental health, and community support. These factors have a more substantial impact on whether individuals engage in criminal activities.
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, people play violent video
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, but these
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don't affect everyone the same way. Personal life experiences and circumstances have a more substantial impact on
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than the
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themselves. In conclusion, every city has to concentrate on other aspects
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preventing crimes
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of attributing them solely to the
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. They have to address overpopulation, unemployment and poverty in greater detail
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high
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rates and violence.
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