The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
The chart provides information
of
Change preposition
on
air
pollution from different sources in the UK between 1990 to 2005.
Overall
, it is clear that
the total amount of air
pollutants
was significantly decreased over this
period. The most air
pollutants
had been emitted from industry activities while
the least emission was released from individual households.
In 1990, the total amount of air
pollutants
in the UK was around 7 million
tonnes
and the highest number
was produced from industry activities about 5.5 million
tonnes
. A similar number
of air
pollutants
was released from transport and households below 1 million
tonnes
. After that
the total Add a comma
,that
number
of air
pollutants
had been
considerably decreased to 4 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
tonnes
in 1999 and dropped to around 3 million
tonnes
in 2005. A significant decline of
Change preposition
in
air
pollutants
occurred from industry which dropped to 2 million
tonnes
in 2005. The transportation
had Correct article usage
Transportation
stable
Change the article
a stable
the stable
number
of air
pollutants
during the period. Although
the number
of air
pollutants
from households was unchanged in the first three years which was similar with
transport, Change preposition
to
but
it was Remove the conjunction
apply
closed
to zero in 2005.Replace the word
close
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