The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,

The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
The chart provides information
of
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air
pollution from different sources in the UK between 1990 to 2005.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the total amount of
air
pollutants
was significantly decreased over
this
period. The most
air
pollutants
had been emitted from industry activities
while
the least emission was released from individual households. In 1990, the total amount of
air
pollutants
in the UK was around 7
million
tonnes
and the highest
number
was produced from industry activities about 5.5
million
tonnes
. A similar
number
of
air
pollutants
was released from transport and households below 1
million
tonnes
. After
that
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the total
number
of
air
pollutants
had
been
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considerably decreased to 4
million
tonnes
in 1999 and dropped to around 3
million
tonnes
in 2005. A significant decline
of
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air
pollutants
occurred from industry which dropped to 2
million
tonnes
in 2005.
The transportation
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had
stable
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a stable
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number
of
air
pollutants
during the period.
Although
the
number
of
air
pollutants
from households was unchanged in the first three years which was similar
with
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transport,
but
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it was
closed
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to zero in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words air, pollutants, million, tonnes, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • air pollutants
  • emissions
  • sources
  • trends
  • decrease/increase
  • significant
  • transport sector
  • industry
  • regulations
  • cleaner technologies
  • domestic heating
  • agriculture
  • overtaken
  • time frame
  • comparison
  • conclusion
  • predicting
  • sulphur dioxide (SO2)
  • nitrogen oxides (NOx)
  • particulate matter (PM)
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