The pie graphs below show the result of a survey children’s activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.
The
given
pie graphs provide information about the consequences of a quote regarding children’s free time activities including Verb problem
apply
boys
and girls
.
Overall
, boys
prefer to play basketball while
girls
prioritize dancing the most. Listening to music is estimated the lowest percentage by both genders.
To begin
with, the boys
’ favorite activity is playing computer games accounting for 34% while
this
figure is almost 3 times lower for girls
. The female participants' main choice is dancing which comprises 27% is not mentioned in a survey for boys
. Computer games are held in second place by boys
34%, however
, this
figure for girls
is almost 3 times lower. The majority of girls
are fond of reading books and made up 21% which is nearly 10 times higher than boys
’ interest in books.
Soccer is one of the favorite activities of boys
and is placed in third place with 17% while
none of the girls
plays soccer. Gymnastics and skateboarding are chosen by 11% of girls
and boys
, respectively. Both genders are interested in listening to music at the same level accounting for 10%. One of the hobbies is netball which is not played by boys
, however
, preferred by 15% of girls
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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