many people like to wear a fashionable clothes. What is the reason for that, do you think this is a good or a bad thing?

The traffic
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congestion continues to be
a pressing issues
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in many cities worldwide, primarily
due to
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excessive number of cars on the roads. Improving public
transportation
and implementing carpooling and
ride sharing
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initiatives can be considered as an effective solution for
this
problem
Initially
, to encourage people to not use their cars there should be an effective public
transportation
system. Investing in efficient and reliable public
transportation
systems,
such
as buses, trains, and subways can provide viable alternatives to driving.
For example
, the cities like Tokyo and Canada has
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public transport
network
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. Even in India the public
transportation
facility in Mumbai is a big example, we can reach anywhere with the help of local trains.
Similarly
, implementing carpooling and
ride sharing
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initiatives can significantly reduce the number of vehicles on the roads. Carpooling programs, supported by incentives like dedicated lanes or reduced tolls, can effectively incentivize commuters to share rides, thereby decreasing congestion. For instance, my sister who is living in Bangalore shares a cab with her colleagues to reach their office. If everyone follows
this
method it can result in reduced traffic and enhanced mobility. Implementing these measures
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a combination of governmental policies, infrastructure investments and public awareness campaigns. By providing efficient and convenient alternatives to driving, individuals can be motivated to choose sustainable
transportation
options, leading to reduced traffic congestion , improved air quality and a more liveable urban environment
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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