21.Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that individuals should look for ways to survive global warming rather than stop it.
This
essay disagrees with that statement because climate change leads to world destruction and the disappearance of humans’ principal needs.
The main reason is that ice melting, deforestation and other activities caused by global heating conduct to the world’s destruction. This
is because these activities are damaging the planet, and as a consequence
, catastrophes will happen frequently such
as earthquakes and tsunamis causing the death of a large number of living things. Even though people
start thinking of ways to live with it, is impossible to stop it, places will be destroyed and humans may be hurt. For example
, Japan is a country where tsunamis happen frequently, to tacke with this
problem they changed the way they build and the material of the buildings, also
they are able to know in advance when tsunamis will happen, but they neither can stop this
catastrophe nor prevent people
and buildings to get damaged.
Another reason is that is
not easy to live with global warming. Some sources that are essential for human beings can be reduced or disappear, as a result
of the causes of climate change, since the irregular weather can spoil crops or other products, leading to scarcity of products, increasing poverty and deaths. Government and people
should take action to control this
problem, investing in green energy resources can improve the situation. For instance
, in many countries lakes and rivers run out of water as a consequence
of the weather, as individuals noticed the problem, lots of companies decided to opt for products that are eco-friendly, then
in this
way, they can reduce contamination and pollution which leads to global heating.
In conclusion, global warming can cause big demolition
to the planet and elements that are crucial for human lives will disappear, and Fix the agreement mistake
demolitions
therefore
, I believe that people
should look for ways to stop climate change.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
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