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Traffic is a very serious problem. The pedestrians and bicycle riders are facing more and more danger. Many gardens become sacrifices to highways. What are the best ways to make the citizens satisfied?

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It is true that nowadays become more and more
problems
 with
traffic
, which can lead to serious troubles for
humans
 like bicycle riders and so on.
Overall
, the are some kinds of
problems
, which can be solved by humanity and might be by the government. It is considered that one of the main
problems
 is rule.
In other words
, nowadays people do not want to keep the
traffic
 rules, because they want just go faster or be in place on time.
Furthermore
, the cause of
this
 increased crashes.
For instance
, in
last
 2022 year in Kazakhstan, 134000 human beings were knocked down by cars.
Consequently
, if it continues, the
problems
 with
traffic
 will not end.
Moreover
, the number of deaths will not decrease. A solution for
this
problem
 might be aggressive rules
such
 as adding the death penalty, long years of prison and so on.
In addition
,
this
problem
 might solved by the government and police, but
this
problem
 needs quite a long period of time. It is assumed that there is another
problem
 with
traffic
. The second reason is not carefulness of riders and just people.
This
 means that there might be situations when the person was with headphones or something else.
According to
 the statistics of
last
 year, in Kazakhstan, just over 30,000
humans
 were hit by cars,trains and so on.
Therefore
, there are
also
problems
 which can be caused by
humans
, not only drivers. A solution for
this
problem
 might be to make rules or just be careful with headphones or with using the telephone near the roads.
Moreover
, in my
opinion
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this
problem
 can easily solved by us
humans
, and surely by the states. In conclusion, there were
problems
 which can lead to
traffic
. Taking everything mentioned into account in our final, analysis we can say that everything is possible, and any
problem
 can solved by the government and definitely by
humans
.
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