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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990, 2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the man features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table provides data regarding the annual
production
 of
milk
 from four different countries, namely Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania and Guatemala in the years 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, the
production
 of
milk
 in all the countries except Australia experienced an upward trend,
whereas
Austrialia
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Australia
 decreased over the given period of two decades.
Firstly
,Tanzania and Guatemala
grown
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 their
milk
production
 from 87,000 and 26,000, respectively, in 1990 to 1,55,000 and 84,000 litres, respectively, in 2010. The least
milk
 was in Guatemala throughout the period of twenty years.
However
, the biggest proportionate increase was
also
 seen in the same country as
the
Correct article usage
apply
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milk
production
 more than
doubles
Wrong verb form
doubled
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 from 1990 to 2010.
Moreover
, The Netherlands produced 11,262,000 litres of
milk
 in 1990, but in 2000, the
production
 fell slightly to 11,155,000 litres, but after that it picked up again and reached an
all time
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 high of 11,466,000.
Austrialia
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Australia
 was closely behind the Netherlands in the
production
 of
milk
 in 1990.
However
, the amount of
milk
 has dramatically
fell
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fallen
felled
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 to 11,105,000 in
next
Correct article usage
the next
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 10 years, after which it sharply fell to its lowest point, about 9,165,000, in 2010.
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