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According to some, good health goes hand in hand with regular exercise, yet others feel that it is more important to maintain a balanced diet. In my opinion, I believe that exercise is more essential for the majority of people.

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Nowadays, people go to the gym
regularly
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 they think that doing
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exercises
 in daily life
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 a vital role in their
life
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.
Moreover
, few mankind
belive
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believe
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 that maintaining a healthy diet
in
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on
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regular
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 basis must have to be for
alive
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while
, some opine that if they play different games with
excercise
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exercise
 that
whould
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would
 be advantageous for them. In
this
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 I would like to
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analyze both
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 of
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after
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coming
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 paragraphs. There are
plethora
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 of reasons is that if folks go to the sports centre it can be better for
the
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 well- being. It could be said that currently,Though crowd prefer to take fast food than energy vegetables as it
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 to a harmful impact not only
the
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 mind but
also
 the physical health
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as a result
public
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the public
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 offer to take participations in the
jym
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gym
, where they can do different types of
excercise
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exercise
such
 as cycling that reduces belly fat or
bunjing
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bunging
burning
 jumping so on.
For instance
, scientists have figured out
half
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population
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the population
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 of The united state spend time in the
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gym
 and they maintain
the
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their
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body
 posture so that doing
excercise
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exercise
in
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apply
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every
days
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day
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 is crucial for
the
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citizen. On
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other hand, most
of
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the
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people prefer to take
balanced
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 diet would be more paramount for the individual because
of
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maintaing
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maintaining
 iron in proper
amount
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amounts
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 has been difficult sothat, they prefer to eat junk food
hence
,
this
 issue can cause
weak
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 immune system
as well as
 some fitness
problem
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problems
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into
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in
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 the
body
.
Moreover
, It might be said that if people
will
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 not take proper protein
such
 as
an
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eggs,
fishes
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fish
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 and salads,
citizen
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citizens
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 cannot stay healthy in their
job
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jobs
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.
For example
, some
reserchers
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researchers
 published in the magazine that if younger
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people buy
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 a proper meal ,
as a result
,they can live longer in
the
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 lives.
To conclude
, Even though
excercises
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exercise
are
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is
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 more powerful for
maintaing
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maintaining
healthy
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a healthy
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body
nonetheless
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healthy foods
are
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also
 play a crucial role
staying
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in staying
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 fit their
body
.
Therefore
, as per my
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perspectives
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 both these statements have distinctive fruitful benefits which will provide a strong mind.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • promotes
  • physical fitness
  • healthy weight
  • immune system
  • mental well-being
  • chronic diseases
  • sleep quality
  • energy levels
  • longevity
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