The charts below show the proportion of people's total spending in a particular European country was spent on different commodities and services in 1957 and in 2008.
The pie diagram above shows the
expenses
structure of people in European countries Change the noun form
expense
in
various products and services, Change preposition
for
such
as housing, clothing, food, and luxuary
goods, etc. Correct your spelling
luxury
The
reporting period between 1957 and 2008, Change preposition
In the
overall
the
clothing was the most Correct article usage
apply
spending
in 1957 Replace the word
spent
whereas
in 2008 the
housing was the highest.
It can be seen that the structure had been changed dramatically over the reporting time. Correct article usage
apply
Fristly
, Correct your spelling
Firstly
cloth
shopping which was the most Correct your spelling
clothes
expense
in 1957 had a significant decline from 32% to 12% in 2008. Meanwhile, Replace the word
expensive
the own
a house which was the largest share that people spent in 2008 had a Wrong verb form
owning
dramtically
increase from 22% in 1957 to 32% in 2008. Correct your spelling
dramatic
Similarly
, the food and luxuary
products which Correct your spelling
luxury
were continue
Change the verb form
continued
rieses
from 8% and 7% in 1957 to 17% and 17% respectively.
All in all, the citizens tended to buy more durable goods and Correct your spelling
rises
daily
products than the others.Correct your spelling
dairy
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