Write a letter to your friend who lives in a different country about your plan to work overseas. In your letter say – What jobs do you plan to do? – Why do you want to work overseas? – Ask for some information related to jobs, such as salary, working hours and so on.

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Dear Jane I hope
this
letter
find
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you well. I have some exciting news to share with you. I am planning to work
in
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overseas and explore more opportunities. As you know
i
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did my
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Accounting
last
year after
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start
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working under CA for my pactise Now
i
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am looking for
opportunity
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an opportunity
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to work in
different
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a different
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country. I am thinking
to
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persue
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pursuing
my
carrier
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career
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in
same
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the same
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field. I searched
so
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many jobs here but
salary
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is not
according to
my desire.
Moreover
, you are living
from
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long
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time in Australia you are the best person for me to get more knowledge. Is it
right
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place for me to move and is it
high
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demanding job in your place or
near by
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? And can you please tell me what is pay rate in
this
field job
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However
, working conditions and time. Hope to meet soon and have
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time together Prabh
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • exciting news
  • explore new opportunities
  • pursue a career
  • invaluable international work experience
  • expand my professional network
  • connect with professionals
  • different cultures and backgrounds
  • immerse myself in a new culture
  • gain a broader perspective on life
  • job opportunities
  • average salary range
  • working hours
  • working conditions
  • marketing industry
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