Some industry leaders below that children should learn computer programming in primary school. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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computer programming in primary schools to cope with the incremental demand for correlative

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suggestions since it could help young

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and imagination. First of all, computers are widely used in various industries nowadays, including business, manufacturing, education, and healthcare. The acquisition of knowledge regarding coding

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an early age could allow young

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to develop more advanced capacities and be outstanding in

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courses nowadays, not all students are able to complete university education.

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in primary school to involve

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necessary capacity for their future

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. 

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, there are many merits provoked by learning coding, one of the biggest

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young

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innovation and

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that young children

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knowledge

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money from Google by solving

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challenge provided by the company.

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, teaching programming in primary school could not only help youth to enhance their abilities

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but could help institutions to make progress with their special perspectives.  To summarise, the demand for gifted engineers growing in size is inevitable, I strongly agree with those leaders in different industries who encourage

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projects in primary schools based on various advantages

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and societies.