You are planning a holiday to Australia . You have been given the name and address of a hotel in the centre of Sydney and would like further information. Write a letter to a hotel. Ask about the availability of the rooms and the hotel’s facilities . Find out if the hotel arranges day trips and ask them to send you a brochure.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I hope

the

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this

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message finds you well. I am writing

this

letter to enquire about the

accomodation

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accommodation

availability

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at your

hotel

Hilton in Sydney.

Firstly

, I am planning a trip to Sydney on December 15th with my family and would like to know the availability of rooms during that period.

Additionally

, I would like to know the different amenities that

hotel

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the hotel

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provides like wifi, food services, swimming and many more.

Furthermore

, we are planning to see some famous tourist attractions nearby and probably wondering

that

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apply

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if your

hotel

has any

facility

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to provide trips? If yes, I would greatly appreciate it if you could send me a brochure or any materials showcasing your

hotel

and the experiences you offer. Thank you in advance for your assistance. I look forward to your response and the possibility of staying at your esteemed establishment during my holiday in Australia. Sincerely, Satya Sannihith Lingutla

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7 paragraphs

152 words

7.00

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Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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