the diagrams below show the stages in the erosion of a headland

the diagrams below show the stages in the erosion of a headland
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The diagrams depict the process in which a headland jutting out towards the
sea
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is eroded by
sea
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waves. At first sight, it can be clearly seen that there are four stages, ranging from eroding weak areas to retreating the headland.
Initially
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, rocks, the weak area of the headland, would be eroded by
sea
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waves and the parts that are gradually scraped create a cave. The next stage transforms the cave into an arch.
This
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process would create an arch when the gradual wave hit the cave many times.
For instance
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, arches have emerged in Durdle Door and Dorset.
Following
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this
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, the top of the stack would be fallen down by the
sea
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wave.
This
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makes a bigger space between the mainland and the stack.
At the end
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of the stages, the high peak of the land protrudes downwards and becomes smaller
such
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as a small rock mountain or remnant rocks.
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Vocabulary: The word "waves" was used 4 times.
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