You recently transferred money into your bank account through online banking but the money was not credited to your account. Write a letter to your bank manager. In your letter, introduce yourself describe the situation tell what you want him to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I have transfer
Change the verb form
transferred
the
some amount using Remove the article
apply
the
online banking to my Correct article usage
apply
bank
account
, but the money is
not Verb problem
has
credited
yet in the Verb problem
apply
account
.
My name is Roshan Singh, resident of Barnala district. I am
Wrong verb form
have been
customer
of your Add an article
a customer
bank
from
Change preposition
for
past
20 years. I have opened my Correct article usage
the past
account
in your branch at the time of joining of job. I am an employee at Suvidha Centre, a public service department in Barnala.
Recently I have
received my income tax refund in my another Unnecessary verb
apply
bank
account
of
ABC Change preposition
apply
Bank
which I have
transferred through net banking to Unnecessary verb
apply
this
account
on a
day before yesterday, i.e., on Monday, but it Correct article usage
the
is
not yet credited Verb problem
has
in
my Change preposition
to
account
.
Could you please check the reason for delay
in crediting the money in the Add an article
the delay
account
? As the
transferred money is about Rs. 70,000 which is very crucial for me because I have to pay Correct word choice
The
deposit
for my knee operation which is scheduled Add an article
a deposit
the deposit
on
Monday next week.
I would be really Change preposition
for
greatful
to you if you could help me to Correct your spelling
grateful
reslove
the Correct your spelling
resolve
above mentioned
issue.
Thanking you,
Yours Sincerely,
Roshan SinghAdd a hyphen
above-mentioned
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite