You recently transferred money into your bank account through online banking but the money was not credited to your account. Write a letter to your bank manager. In your letter, introduce yourself describe the situation tell what you want him to do

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I have
transfer
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the
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some amount using
the
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online banking to my
bank
account
, but the money
is
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not
credited
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yet in the
account
. My name is Roshan Singh, resident of Barnala district. I
am
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customer
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a customer
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of your
bank
from
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past
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the past
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20 years. I have opened my
account
in your branch at the time of joining of job. I am an employee at Suvidha Centre, a public service department in Barnala. Recently I
have
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received my income tax refund in my another
bank
account
of
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ABC
Bank
which I
have
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transferred through net banking to
this
account
on
a
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day before yesterday, i.e., on Monday, but it
is
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not yet credited
in
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my
account
. Could you please check the reason for
delay
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the delay
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in crediting the money in the
account
?
As the
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transferred money is about Rs. 70,000 which is very crucial for me because I have to pay
deposit
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a deposit
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for my knee operation which is scheduled
on
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Monday next week. I would be really
greatful
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grateful
to you if you could help me to
reslove
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resolve
the
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issue. Thanking you, Yours Sincerely, Roshan Singh
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